In this week, I have concentrated on adjusting my projects with the feedback I have received.
First, by following the lecturer’s advice, I have made the opening title longer for audiences to read:
In the dream scene, inspired by the dream scene in Rango (2019), I have added bigger scale of Goblin models on the background of my project:
Due to my robot’s lack of any facial rig, therefore its ambition and desire for money in its dream become signs of unreal ‘$’ to deliver to the audiences (a rendered clip below to show the semiotic):
In the workspace, I have removed the shots that were pointed out as crossing the 180-degree rule and added more that were inspired by Toy Story 2 (1999):
In the end, The film shows the interaction between the fixer and Woody, mine shows the close-up of the robotic face after and following up its distance to the mannequin:
Before the tattoo process begins, I have added a shot of the robot moving to the dummy from the latter’s perspective to show their interaction more straightforwardly.
My rendered version of this week’s progression: