This week, I have concentrated on receiving feedback from the lecturer about my draft essay and working on the reference list of YouTube videos.
Here is the feedback given by the lecturer:
- Change the subtitle of my essay.
- Put all my illustrative images into an image list.
- Changing the space to 1.5.
My initial subtitle, ‘From last century’s work to the present day,’ is too long for this 1500-word essay. Although I have used examples from different centuries, I am concentrating more on the film language side of the differences between orthodox and experimental animation.
Therefore instead of saying the time of the work I will be researching, I changed to say the expression ways of film languages applied into 2 kinds of animations.
About the illustrative images by putting them into an image list to make my essay looking more organizing:
Also, I have checked the way of referring YouTube videos in my essay:
Here is my result:
And this list includes all the examples I have added to the essay: