In this week I have focused on a few little details of my 3D previs left to be adjusted. Here are what I have changed by following the feedback:
I exaggerated the movement of my male character when he lied on the ground and wanting his underwear back from the female character under a high angle shot.
I adjusted the time of the cut in the mind world, to ensure they are not looking so interruptive.
I make sure the male character turns onto its left during the moment he feels embarrassed, and so his face could easily face the camera. And linking to his shit in the next shot.