in this week I have kept developing my 3D previs by following my lecturer’s feedback, and here are what I have improved:
When the underwear is landing on the male character’s face, there would be a few seconds in still before the female character leans forward and pick it up.
I changed the camera position of shooting the moment when the female character picks the underwear up.
I get rid of the medium long shot in the mind world of the female character, as there are too many cuts, which messes up the scene a little bit.
I adjusted the movement flow of how does the underwear fly through the moment approaching to the female character.
I extend the time of the shot where my female character shows her prop from her pocket.
I adjusted her movement through the time she lifts up her arm.
I extend the time of the shot where both of my characters show their underwear.
I extend the time of the moment where my two characters look at each other, before they kill in the last shot of the animation.