In this week, I have changed a bit structure of the story narrative after received the feedback from the lecturer. Therefore, I have added a reason for the woman character knows what is hidden in the male character more fluently:

As I decided to let the male character fall over in the beginning of the story to create the chance, here is the main reference video I checked online:

And I found instead of using Banana to slide down the male character, I could use the more common prop– Icecream, left on the ground of the park where they date:


Also, I have added more reaction shot or shot reverse shot into my 3S previs after receiving feedback, which helps audiences to concentrate more on the performance and props of characters.





I have also been told by holding ‘\’ with left mouse bottom, I will be able to zoom out the scene and see things beyond the camera:

I have also been told I can move master control to adjust the position of characters in the animation blocking easily:
