In this week I have condensed my 3D Previs from last week, improved the timing and spacing, completing the character bio and fixing some shot compositions through the feedback given by the lecturer.
Here is my more comprehensive character bio:
Here is the shot list I have made before and after the feedback session based on my editing of shots:
The biggest difference between them is the current one gets rid of some confusing shots in the mental imagery:
The changed scale of park benches through scaling down their component at the same time:
As I also develop the composition of the shot, I import the PNG picture of rules of third into my camera:
And indication of how to let the underwear to follow it in the feedback, with my developed shots:
The tip of keep two characters have similar distances to the side of the frame, to create the balance of the shot: